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一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.近年来,各大城市雾霾(haze)情况越来越严重,整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象,原因,应对措施,写一份英文的倡议书,呼吁大家保护环境,减少对空气的污染。 要点提示:
(1)我国空气污染的现象。(至少写2点) (2) 空气污染产生的原因。(至少写2点) (3)减少空气污染的措施。(至少写2点) 要求:
(1) 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (2) 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来,各大城市雾霾(haze)情况越来越严重,主要从空气污染的现象,原因,应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好,后面跟动词原形,take a bus表示乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语,用的是动词的ing形式。
2.亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束,你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九(1)班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示:
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园(校园干净而美丽,活动非富多彩);老师(传授知识,教会做人,经常鼓励);同学(和睦相处,互相学习,共同进步)。 3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。 要求:
1. 文章包含以上提示内容,适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的初中生活。 【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My name is……,I’m glad to……,Our campus is……,Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况,接下来介绍我们的校园,老师和同学,最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3.书面表达
假定你是李华,最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论,你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信,简单介绍以下讨论结果: 1.节水节电. 2.垃圾分类 3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕
4.步行、骑自行车或公交出行、 参考词汇:low carbon低碳;tissue纸巾
词数:100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,向我的英国朋友Peppa写信,介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。 【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:We can do……,we’d better……,we suggest……,which contributes to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论,接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.书面表达
社会需要爱,时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动,存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动,而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞,让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧!是什么行为让你点赞?讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么?让我们一起分享吧!请根据以下提示要点,写一篇文章。 注意:1.词数:80左右;2.不要出现真实的人名及校名。 Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button What could you learn from him/her?
【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,讲述一件我点赞的事情,我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I should……,He is……,He always helps……,I want to……,so they can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人,接下来介绍他的情况,最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5.(B)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:
1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异. 2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己. 3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮. 4.女孩也喜欢运动,希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条. 5.你对运动的观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字 7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数. 8.参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条) What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in
sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法,应该用一般现在时态,写作要点要包括:1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析(多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点)。3.提出自己对运动的观点。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,主谓一致,在文中使用了时间状语从句,定语从句,特别使用一些亮点词句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,句子通顺,行文连贯。
6. 书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。
Parents' opinions Get ready for high school. Do some housework… Kid's opinions Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing… Your opinion … 注意]
(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥; (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息; (4)词数:不少于80。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系. 【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。
7.自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。 假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing 提示问题:
Why is it important to be confident? What experience made you more confident? How can we become more confident? It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can
finally make it and gain more confidence. 【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
8.请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文,把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。 Time Good habits Bad habits In the morning Get up early Eat junk food for breakfast In class Ask some questions Quarrel(争吵) with her classmates sometimes After school Always exercise Go home late In the evening Help her parents with housework Watch TV or play computer games for more than an hour 要求:1、语言要通顺,表达要正确。 2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。 3、词数不少于60个英语单词。 4、文章开头结尾已给出,不计入词数。 【答案】One possible version Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl.
Do you think so? Yours Huang Deshun 【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知,本文主要用一般现在时态,第三人称进行叙述,写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点,做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高兴做某事;a lot of许多;get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起来逻辑清楚,条理分明。在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理. 考点:考查提纲类作文
9.近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents(扫雪机式父母)”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍,解决一切困难,以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。
请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点,并结合此观点阐述自己的看法,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
理解 观点 父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。 自己的看法 不理解 父母控制一切,孩子没有自由。 自己的看法 要求:
1、词数:60-80词。
2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点,可适当发挥。 3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life. In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they
are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives. 【解析】 【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求就“Snowplow Parents(扫雪机式父母)” 这一话题展开讨论,并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点,结合此观点阐述自己的看法。在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,然后再动笔写作。
2.例文点评: 本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第三人称,辅以第一人称。文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因,接下来说明自己的观点,并阐述自己观点的原因。 3.高分亮点:
短语:in one's lives,in this case,in this way,in trouble。 句型:
高分句型一:In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.In this case在这样的情况下;这句话意为:在这样的情况下,他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。 高分句型二:they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble. be in trouble 陷入麻烦,这句话意为:当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。
10.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣,给你写信想了解该诗,请你根据以下提示给他回信: 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数: 80-100词左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】
根据内容可知,这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分:
第一部分:交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。
第二部分:文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大
第三部分:信的结语——如果对方有任何问题,可以继续问自己,并期待收到对方的来信。
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