即成Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that people tend to spend more money to buy gifts during the Spring Festival, but as for my part, the following
two are of great value.
其次,具体原因。对于春节期间人们更乐意将钱花在购买新年礼物上这一现象,其原因很多,包括春节在中国节日里面的重要性促使人们回家时购买大量礼物,以及春节期间各种礼物广告的泛滥变相鼓励了人们去花钱等等,当然还有其他的一些原因,大家可以自由发挥,只要合情合理即可。但是要注意:考虑到语言多样性的评分标准,写作时不可只用简单的单词或短语来衔接列举原因,因此可以用句子来列举,具体如下:On the top of list is that the current state of the affair may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the widely spreading advertisements of gifts. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally acknowledged that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in our nation during which most people will buy gifts for their families and friends.
以上是第二段的主要内容,接下来继续看第三段。 第三段中主要就上面分析的这一现象进行趋势预测,那么很明显在接下来的很长一段时间里春节期间人们都会花大量地钱来为身边的亲人、朋友购买新年礼物,这种形式将会持续下去。因此,按照之前准备的固定句型,可用Taking into account what
has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the present situation concisely conveyed by the pie chart will sustain in the forthcoming years.
整合以上所讲,今年的大作文写作可如下:
Here is a pie chart, simple but accurate. It goes without saying that the chart records the proportions of the Spring Festival‘s expense of the residents in a certain city in China, which successfully arouses our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the graph, the expense has been spent on totally different things. Especially, the money used to buy the New Year’s gifts accounts for 40% of the entire expense, which already outweighs all the others. Definitely, what the chart reflects is supposed to be given further analysis.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that people tend to spend more money to buy gifts during the Spring Festival, but as for my part, the following two are of great value. On the top of list is that the current state of the affair may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the widely spreading advertisements of gifts. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally acknowledged that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in our nation during which most people will buy gifts for their families and friends.
Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the present situation concisely
conveyed by the pie chart will sustain in the forthcoming years.