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写作规范提能练 四
限时40分钟
Ⅰ. 语法填空
阅读下面材料, 在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
A sea of green gardens surrounds Windsor Castle in the English countryside. It looks out onto the river Thames and sits next 1. ________a hunting ground. It was built just outside of London 2. ________(protect)the capital from enemies on the west side.
Windsor Castle is the oldest and largest 3. ________(occupy)castle in the world. It was built just after 1066. The castle has a long, rich and troubled history. 4. ________ the castle walls could talk, they’d have many stories to tell.
Kings, were born and 5. ________(die)here. It’s been used as the homes of kings and queens for centuries. However, it was also used as a prison during the English Civil War(12～1651). During World WarⅡ, the royal family 6. ________ (secret)slept at Windsor Castle because it was safer than London’s urban area.
Today, Windsor Castle is the private home of Queen ElizabethⅡ. When she is not meeting guests at Buckingham Palace, she goes to Windsor Castle. 7. ________ that’s not all. Windsor Castle is also open to the public. It is now one of England’s
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most popular 8. ________(attract). Visitors can look at some of the finest artworks, 9. ________(include)the paintings of Rembrandt, as well as the well-kept gardens. What is a better way to learn about England 10. ________to enjoy some of the country’s finest scenery?
1. 【解析】to。next to是固定搭配, 意思是“在……旁边”, 故填to。 2. 【解析】to protect。根据句意, 可知此处要用不定式表目的。
3. 【解析】occupied。分析句子, 可知此空要用occupy的过去分词形式表示被动和完成, 作castle的定语。
4. 【解析】If。分析句意可知这是一个虚拟句。根据句意, 可知要用引导词if引导虚拟条件句。
5. 【解析】died。分析文意, 由于本句讲述的是过去的情况, 故用一般过去时。and前的were可以提示。
6. 【解析】secretly。根据句意, 需要用一个副词来修饰动作slept, 故填secretly。 7. 【解析】But。分析句子的意思, 可知在这两个句子之间要用一个表转折的连词。
8. 【解析】attractions。由于空格前是一个形容词popular, 故此处要用名词, 根据句意, 要用其复数形式。
9. 【解析】including。根据句意, 可知此处要填介词including, 意思是“包括”。 10. 【解析】than。根据空格前的better, 并结合句意, 可知要填连词than。 Ⅱ. 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增
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加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Victor was traveling through a train for his parents. All the time he is glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him. After some time, he removed his shoes to take him a nap.
After waking up, he found one of her shoes missing. He started crying unhappy. His parents tried to comfort him. His father told him it was no use cry and promised that after reaching home, he would buy him a new pair of shoes.
Victor got very excited on hearing his father’s words that he threw other shoe out of the train. Reaching the destination, he suddenly found his losing shoe in a basket. How he regretted it! 答案:
Victor was traveling through a train for his parents. All the time he is
with was
glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him. After
that/which
some time, he removed his shoes to take him a nap.
After waking up, he found one of her shoes missing. He started crying unhappy. his unhappily
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His parents tried to comfort him. His father told him it was no use cry and promised
crying
that after reaching home, he would buy him a new pair of shoes.
Victor got very excited on hearing his father’s words that he threw ∧other shoe
so the
out of the train. Reaching the destination, he suddenly found his losing shoe in a
lost
basket. How he regretted it!
【文章大意】本文记叙了Victor在与父母的旅途中不小心错失自己鞋子的经历。 1. 【解析】第一句for→with。考查介词。with表示“和……”, Victor和他的父母乘坐一辆火车旅行。
2. 【解析】第二句is→was。考查时态。文章时态是过去时, 前后时态要保持一致, 所以is改成was。
3. 【解析】第二句what→that/which。考查引导词。that/which引导的定语从句修饰名词shoes。
4. 【解析】第三句去掉him。考查固定搭配。take a nap是固定搭配, 表示“小憩”的意思。
5. 【解析】第四句her→his。考查人称代词。人称代词使用错误。句意: 当他醒来的时候, 他发现一只鞋不见了。
6. 【解析】第五句unhappy→unhappily。考查副词。unhappy是形容词, 表示“不高兴的”, 而unhappily是副词。句意: 他很不高兴地哭了。cry是动词, 所以要用副词修饰。
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7. 【解析】第七句cry→crying。考查动词-ing形式。it was no use doing sth. 表示“做某事是无用的”。句意: 他的父亲告诉他哭是没用的, 并承诺他回到家之后再给他买一双新鞋。
8. 【解析】第八句very→so。考查连词。句意: 他听到父亲的话以后非常兴奋。so. . . that. . . 固定句式。
9. 【解析】第八句在other前加the。考查冠词。the表示“特指”, 特指另外一只鞋子。
10. 【解析】第九句losing→lost。考查形容词。句意: 到达目的地后, 他发现丢失的那只鞋子在一个篮子里面, 他是多么后悔啊! Ⅲ. 书面表达
假如你是李华, 收到美国表妹(Andy)的电子邮件, 提及她父母想看她的微信朋友圈(WeChat Moments), 她对是否应与他们分享感到犹豫。请给她回信, 要点如下:
1. 观点(赞成或反对); 2. 主要理由; 3. 提出建议。
注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。 Dear Andy,
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【参考范文】 Dear Andy,
What a pleasant surprise to get your email today! You told me that your parents asked to see your WeChat Moments and that you’re hesitating about whether to share it with them.
In my opinion, it’s meaningful for your parents to see your Moments. As parents, they have responsibility to make sure you’ve made right friends and won’t be harmed or misled by bad information. Probably, you never know you’ll take more risks while you are free to share things online! As a teenager, you do need your parents’ guidance, especially in terms of social experiences. What’s more, sharing your Moments will bring you all closer to each other. Therefore, you’d better give them a place in your own world so that you can enjoy a better communication.
Please remember me to your parents.
Sincerely, Li Hua
【规律方法】写对写好英语句式五法 一、分解法
就是把一个句子分成两个或两个以上的句子。这样既能把意思表达得更明了, 又能减少写错句子的几率。例如: ①我们要做就要做好。
If we do a thing, we should do it well.
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②从各地来的学生中有许多是北方人。 There are students here from all over the country. Many of them are from the North. 二、合并法
就是把两个或两个以上的简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来。这种方法最能体现学生的英语表达能力, 同时也最能提高文章的可读性。例如:
①我们迷路了, 这使我们的野营旅行变成了一次冒险。 Our camping trip turned into an adventure when we got lost. ②天气转晴了, 这是我们没有想到的。
The weather turned out to be very fine, which was more than we could expect. 三、删减法
就是在写英语句子时, 把相应汉语句子里的某些词、短语或重复的成分删掉或省略。例如:
①这部打字机真是物美价廉。
This typewriter is very cheap and fine indeed.
注: 汉语表达中的“价”和“物”在英语中均无需译出。 ②个子不高不是人生中的严重缺陷。
Not being tall is not a serious disadvantage in life.
注: 汉语说“个子不高”, 其实就是“不高”。也就是说, 其中的“个子”在英语中无需译出。 四、移位法
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由于英语和汉语在表达习惯上存在差异, 根据表达的需要, 某些成分需要前置或后移。例如: ①他发现赚点外快很容易。 He found it easy to earn extra money.
注: it在此为形式宾语, 真正的宾语是句末的不定式to earn extra money。 ②告诉我这事的人不肯告诉我他的名字。
The man who told me this refused to tell me his name.
注: who told me this为修饰the man的定语从句, 应置于其后。 五、意译法
有的同学写句子时, 一遇见生词或不熟悉的表达, 就以为是“山穷水尽”了。其实, 此时我们可以设法绕开难点, 在保持原意的基础上, 用不同的表达方式写出来。例如:
①汤姆一直在扰乱别的孩子, 我就把他赶了出去。
Tom was upsetting the other children, so I showed him the door. ②你可以同我们一起去或是待在家中, 悉听尊便。 You can go with us or stay at home, whichever you choose.
当然, 在写句子时千万不要拿句子去套方法, 也不要拿方法去套句子。处处留心皆学问。只要加强知识的积累, 一定还会有更好的方法。
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